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Gone is what we used to be.
I regret it now; I finally see....
It's time to set these feelings free
That once almost destroyed me.

You probably don't think it's true,
But, yes, I was in love with you.
I just now realized that we're through,
And I think it's split my heart in two.

Even though I know we're over,
Sometimes I still look over my shoulder,
Hoping it's me that you're looking at, though you're holding her.
I can feel my heart freeze.....It gets colder and colder.

One day soon it will break,
But what difference does it make?
I have realized my mistake,
But, alas, it is too late.

To have ever loved in the first place
Was what brought me to such disgrace.
By staying here, I'm losing face.
By leaving, my hopes go to waste.

I won't try to get back together;
I don't think that would work, not ever,
But losing you's got me feeling rather
Not quite right....under the weather.

I know you may not get this letter;
That's probably for the better,
And while my rhyming scheme's not clever,
I want you to know I'm yours.....forever.
this poem is for one person, and one person ONLY!
if he knows who he is, please forget about me and move on with my love.
I can only hurt you, and I'm tired of doing that.
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TNerdSansT Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2017  New Deviant Student Writer
;_;
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:iconblackscarletrose56:
my friend is nearly in tears reading this
your really clever and great ;)
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:iconmadhatterkyoko:
madhatterkyoko Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2015
Thank you so much for saying so!
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Dragonskunk Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2015   Artist
:CheerUp: 
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:iconmindfecker:
mindfecker Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That is really amazing (good). I think we have all been in that situation.
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:iconmadhatterkyoko:
madhatterkyoko Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014
Yup, it was a rough time for me.
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:iconmindfecker:
mindfecker Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
those kinds of things will never be forggotten :'(
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awesomeness365 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
this is so beautiful but sad :( your a great writer though so keep up the amazing work :D
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:iconmadhatterkyoko:
madhatterkyoko Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014
Thank you, hun. >w<
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VariaGuardians Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Student Artist
Not for me but i still like it
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sonamygurl234 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
omg this is soooo good
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:iconmadhatterkyoko:
madhatterkyoko Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013
Thank you. ;w;
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sonamygurl234 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem :)
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BrokenFin369 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Student Writer
awwwwwww!!! So sad!

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mariav13 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Student Artist
what beautiful poetry i had heard doesn't compare to this one its very nice and i know your pain girl
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Cynical-Entity Featured By Owner Edited Mar 16, 2015  Student Writer

I'd hate to be rude or that person, but judging from the comments below--I only have one thing to say. Like my good friend told me, this piece is neither beautiful nor worth crying for. It's horrible, ugly, and sad human truths. This poem will never be pretty, because emotions are never beautiful. It's filled with anxiety--as if having to read a presentation in front of a class. 
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madhatterkyoko Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013
Thank you. I'm glad you are able to understand my feelings. ;w;
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:iconmariav13:
mariav13 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Student Artist
well we all do
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brOKen-Mayhem17 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013
Beautiful!!! The most beautiful words ever spoken, come from the heart. Great work!:)
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:iconmadhatterkyoko:
madhatterkyoko Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013
Thank you. ;w;
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brOKen-Mayhem17 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013
Welcome!!;)
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cat12553 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
The first thing that came to my mind was being rejected by ur crush n he just rubs it in ur face it hurt but I read ur poem n en I realize a lot of things I hasn't n the pain stopped so thank u so much for the poem! :3
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madhatterkyoko Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013
I'm glad it was able to touch your heart. ;>
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cat12553 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:3
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Kinkie-san Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013
this poem.... it speaks to me .... im in the same situation.... but I don't wanna move on.... its silly I know... but it hurts doesn't it?
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:iconmadhatterkyoko:
madhatterkyoko Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013
It did hurt me when I wrote it. And it still hurts me a little, but the pain has gotten less with each passing year.
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Kinkie-san Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013
yes I guess you are right but /: the pain and memories are what still holds me bk you know and your welcome ^^
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Cocolena Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student Writer
thats really good!
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:iconmadhatterkyoko:
madhatterkyoko Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
Thanks!
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Cocolena Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Student Writer
:)
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TheAnimeFreak2 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist
...I just don't know what to say...
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:iconmadhatterkyoko:
madhatterkyoko Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013
I used to have feelings like this, but I feel like they've dried out.
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alygatorleigh Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Student General Artist
lovely
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thecr8tive1 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Student General Artist
*sniff* *sniff* greatly written from the heart. *sniff* yea same thing with mine. I saw him with this popular blonde chick, just because i said i cant go out with him, but it seems the terms and title "girlfriend" and "boyfriend" pleases him. He seems so distant to me now, and i t hurts. Before he asked me out he'd give me hugs, and hi's w/ wide smiles full of joy, i used to blush. but now it seems like he doesn't know me. One day he swept me off my feet and i was like OMG this cant be happening, cuz u kno how u dream of prince charming, but during the school days i saw him sweep tht blonde chick off her feet too. so he avoids me now, and i dont know if it was my fault or his. but im moving on and my heart is healing slowly.
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madhatterkyoko Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
Well, I would want to call someone my "boyfriend" if I was seeing them and loved them, so I'm not 100% sure I understand your troubles. ;.;
But I'm sorry you're down about it.
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thecr8tive1 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Student General Artist
well im over it now. *shrug* but thanks anyway. and i would too but...ever since i said i can't go out with him (cuz parents) he's been distant....very. yea but o well
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Ace3012 Featured By Owner May 11, 2011
Very moving...excellence
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Ceiciel Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011   Traditional Artist
TACO! :D
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liljess111 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2010
i love this poem you did a really good job on it. you remind me of my best friend . she write poems like this !
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:iconmadhatterkyoko:
madhatterkyoko Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2010
Thank you. I put my heart and soul into it.
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liljess111 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2010
your welcome
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xoshortie4lifexo Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2010
Nice poem I can relate to what you are feeling. =/
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:iconmadhatterkyoko:
madhatterkyoko Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2010
I'm sorry that you can. It is not a good place to be.
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rexthepowerful Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2010
i love this poem write more please
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AnimeAndPoemzFan Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2010   Writer
OMG! i luv that poem!
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:iconmadhatterkyoko:
madhatterkyoko Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2010
Thank you~
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AnimeAndPoemzFan Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010   Writer
u r welcome.
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shoegal123 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2010
i love this!! i can relate it to a situation i was in recently and i think you pretty much summed up what its like to be in a situation like that.
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TeQuieroRiss Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2010
Beautiful poem <3
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